Writing #2: Writing for different audiences (due Monday)
Write two short letters asking to borrow some money. The first letter is to either your parents or your best friend. The second letter is to the loan officer at the bank.
I need some help from you. Now, I’m in serious financial payment. Next week, I have to pay the money for school but I don’t have enough money to do that. If I can’t pay the payment into Friday next week, the college will be dropped me off. So, I need to loan $3,000 from you.
I will return you the money within next two months, in two installments.
Bank of Houston Community College 1010 West Sam Houston Pkwy N, Houston, TX 77043
To whom it may concern,
My name is Bow Woo. I’m a student of HCC. I would like to obtain a personal loan in the amount of $3,000. This loan will be used to help me to enroll the classes. It’s important to me for study in this semester.
Please, contact me at your earliest convenience to discuss this matter further. I can be reached anytime at 832-345-6789. I would like to get this matter taken care of immediately.
I got a trouble. I got a accident in last week. I need to pay for Service king's payment. If I don't pay it , I can't get my car ,and then I can't go to work and take class.so can you borrow 1000 dollars for me. I will return for you after two weeks.
Please help Yeming Zheng
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Bank of chace 10850 Bellaire Blvd Houston, TX 77072 United States
Dear, loan officers
My name is Yeming Zheng, i'm a student of Hcc I'm writing request for a personal loan of $1000 from your bank.the loan will pay for Service King . It is important to me for get my car.
I have a job , I am working in Cafe 101,I have been working for the past one and half year. Feel free contact the restaurant and verify that I work on there. The telephone numbers 713 272 8828.
I will be very grateful,if you can consider me for a loan of $1000 .you can contact me anytime on telephone 713 884 9994.
I would like to obtain a personal loan of 2000$. This among will be use for paid HCCollege semester that will begin the next school period. As you can see I was a Bank of America client since a long time, I have a very good record in my account since I opened 10 years ago. The reason that I am asking the loan is because I decided to improve my academic curriculum to improve my work skills. I appreciate all you can do to help me to get the loan.
Thank you for your time
Sincerely
Fanny
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08/27/2016
Dear friend:
Hi, I hope you and all your family are fine. My husband and kids are doing well. As you know I want to improve my work skills, remember the last time you called me? I think I have to take these classes to reach the goal that we spoke of, but unfortunately I do not have the money. I am writing to you to ask if you could lend me money, 2000$ to be specific. We can arrange a way to pay you back, that is the most convenient for you. I will appreciate a lot this favor ... Thank you so much I love you Fanny
How are you doing? I hope all is well with you. I'm starting new semester soon and I'm having some financial troubles. I earned enough money for tuition by working full time during summer at the tea house near my school. However, I still need more money to buy books. The tea house is under innovation now so I can't get back to work until next month. Would you be able to lend me $400 to buy books? I will pay you back as soon as I return to work. Please let me know.
Thank you,
Anh Hoang.
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August 27th, 2016.
Dear loan officer,
My name is Anh Hoang. This is letter serves as my application for an auto loan in the amount of $5000. I'm buying a used 2013 Hyundai Sonata. Through researches and recommendations from family, I found that your bank offers the best interest rate and benefit to borrowers. I'm working part time at T&H Construction and making around $2700 monthly. Employment verification is attached. I believe my income is enough to pay back the loan soon. Please let me know if you can approve this application.
It seems like we haven't met for a long time, i guess it's about almost 8 years from the day that you became a President. Oh... i should call you Mr. President. I have been watching you and I always agree what you are doing. By the time you almost complete your last term running America, I will be finishing my education. Since I don't have enough money to start my business, I really need an amount of $5000. I'm sure that I will give you back as soon as I can and during the time that i owe you, I will share to you my profit. Thank you for your time. Your friend, Eric. --------------------------------------------------- 2 : Ask money from bank
08-27-2016
Chase Bank 11111 New York RD NYC
To whom it may concern :
I'm asking for a loan about $5000. I need this money to get married. I have been paying my loan in time and i have a good record. I'm sure i have enough money from my job that can pay this loan. My income is about $40000/year as a supervisor in my company.
I really appreciate for your time and please inform me with any notification.
I'm writing this letter to apply for a loan for my college.I'm going to attend the fall 2016 for full time and for 12 hours.I'm asking for a loan for $2000 to pay for my tuition books.I can send you a copy of my schedule and the invoice for my classes , if requested. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours
Mogheenee Murday
2. 08-28-2016
Dear Sabrina, How are your doing? It's been almost a year with haven't talk to each other. I hope everything is going ok with your new job and you are enjoying living in California. It difficult for me to ask a favor from you. I started college and i'm struggling to cover the cost of my school . I'm asking if it possible to help me with a $2000 to cover the cost.I would pay you back within 1 year as am applying for a job. Please let me know, if u can help within the next week because i have to pay the remaining balance within 10 days.
Hello how are you? I hope you are well. I write to ask for a loan of $ 1,000 to pay for college next semester. I'll return the money as soon as possible, I appreciate this favor.
Chase Bank 600 Travis St, Houston, TX 77002 August 28th, 2016
To whom It May Concern,
My name is Erika Ortega, I am a student of HCC. I am writing to ask you a personal loan of $ 1000 to pay next semester at school. Your loan would me much help.
I would be grateful if you would help me for the loan, you can contact me at 832 654 2548. Thank you for your time.
Dear Amy ff How are you? I hope everything going well. Now I have some problems for pay my school.And I need to borrow $1000 from you. I'm so thinkful if you can help me. I will return your money within one month. please thanks your friend lei ------------------------------------------------- Bank of America Dear loan offer My name is lei, I'm a student of HCC. I wold like to obtain a person loan for $1000. This will be halp me this semester. I have account in bank of america and I have good credit.The reason that I ask for bank of america because you have very good loan without interests. I hope you can help me to get this loan. I will pay the loan monthly from my account. Please let me know if my applition get approve. Thank you for your time. lei August 28th 2016
Hello how are you? I write to see if I can help with a problem, if you can borrow the amount of $ 3000, I will need to pay the semester of college. I would appreciate your help.
As you know, I'm going back to school now. And I already enrolled for the class and haven't paid for it yet! I need your help. I can afford for the books by working part time at the cashier in Ranch Market next to our house. However, I need to borrow $1200 to pay tuition for this semester. I promised I will work full time in summer to pay the money back to you. Thank you Dad and Mom Love you Your lovely son Thoai Tran
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Bank of JPMorgan, Chase 132131 Fry Road Katy, TX 77561
August, 28,2016
To whom it may concern
I'm Thoai Tran. I have been looking for a car with efficient fluid and affordable for me. Finally, I found the car I want to buy and I would like you to obtain for a auto loan about $15K. This will help me to buy a new car because it is dangerous when I drive a 1995's car on freeway .I'm currently working at the facial shop and my salary is about $22K to $28 per year. I have been working here for three years. I hope this information could get approve the auto loan from you. If you have any question, call me at 1233433577 Sincerely Thoai Tran
How are you? I want to tell you i'm finish my level and i'm go to next level so that mean you need to transfer money to my account. Atless before 5th of September. Thank you dad for the support me.
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Chase Bank 1490 Eldridge Pkwy Houston, TX 77077
Dear loan officer.
How are you? I hope every things it's ok. Generally as you now i'm student and i need a lot of money for school and apartment rent. It's important to pay after a few days. I wish to help me for loan.
My name is Yongling Yang. I am writing to request for a $5,000 loan from your bank. I need the loan to complete two-year study of Logistic in HCC. I have studied English for 2 months in HCC and will finish in this December. Then, I am going to study Logistic for 2 years in HCC. My GPA is above 3.5 until now. After I pass the English course, I will get a two-year contract of a part-time job in a Chinese and English institute, and it will also provide accommodation. The salary is estimated $1000 at the least. Therefore, I will be able to pay off the loan in 2 years. I will appreciate if you could consider me for a loan of $5,000 over a period of two years. You can contact me on cellphone 000-0000-0000 to arrange an interview if required. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Yongling Yang --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A Letter to My Best Friend
Hi, Yoyo
I have only $20 this month to live on. The next half month, I just can drink water to survive. Can you borrow me $200 to pass the difficult? I can return it on 1st next month. Hope to hear from you soon.
I hope You are well with all my cousins, Peter, Frank and July, and I like to let You know that my wedding anniversary is coming in December and I promise my wife to go to Can Cun to our anniversary, but the problem is, I do not have enough money, and I like to ask you for a 3.000 dollars loan and I will pay you $ 1000 per month. when We came back from Can Cun , We are going to make a party and you will be the first guess of the party I love Uncle Jose sincerely Luis Alcayaga
Dear John, How are you doing, how is your work and your family, hope everything is going on well with you? john i will like to express to you my present situation on need,i need some money to balance my tuition fee before the due date, you are my only friend i can express this to and hopefully i receive a good response from you soon.
Adetoye 1450 Empanada dr Houston Tx 77083 08/28/2016
Chase Bank 14502 Highway 6 s Houston TX 77083.
APPLICATION FOR LOAN Dear Sir/Ma Good day, i Adetoye Ajomole with the above address here by apply for a loan from you bank,i need this money to balance up my tuition fee and get my test books. i will like to be considered for this loan and i promise to pay back at when due. hope to hear back from you soon.
I would like to obtain a personal loan in the amount of $ 3.000.00. This loan will be used to celebrate our wedding anniversary, and We are planing to go to Cancun. I have been a longtime banking with you and I have four open accounts with you. I had a loan with your bank , which I paid off. I currently self employed with my Income tax business and I just celebrated our 26th year anniversary. I have an excellent credit history and I hope you approve my loan Sincerely luis Alcayaga
I don't think the bank will loan you money to go to Cancun and I don't think they care about your wedding anniversary! But the rest of the letter is good :)
Hello, im writing this letter regardless a favor i need from you. As you know, we been best friends for 6 years so long, and well, i need to borrow money from you. My parents dont want to help me move out, but i need my independence from them. I promise i will pay you back as soon i get a job. You know well that between us never been any issues with anything. Let me know if i can count on you.
Love, Rosaida. ___________________________
Dear Chase bank,
Im writing this letter in favor of a loan I desperately need. Recently my parents called me, telling me that they will need to move in with me fast as possible. I recently live in a one bed room apartment, but this wont be enough for all of us. I need to buy furnitures and appliance for the house as well. Ive been responsible with all my payments in the bank and my credit score is very good. If i receive that loan, it will help me and my family greatly. Hope I get a respond back from you guys. Thank you
Hello my friends, how are you? I know, we have a lot of time that didn’t have talked. I’m writing this letter to ask if you remember when 3 years ago I borrowed $ 1000. Well, can you give it back? I see that you in this days have a great position in the company that you are working, so I need some more money, in totally I need $2500. May you borrow me that amount? I promise that I will pay you as soon as possible. Before I didn’t need the money but right now I have a real health problem so, I can’t afford the bills. My back each day is worse, I’m going to take an appointment with a few doctors and take a lot of exams, such as blood test and x-rays. I hope that you answer soon.
Thanks so much my Costi. Your friends Mena.
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Bank of the Health Care. 2743 Jeanette rd. Houston, Texas. 77067.
To whom it may concern.
My name is Ximena Mora, I am 26 years old and I have back problems. I’m from Venezuela and my current status is F1 for that I can’t afford all of the bills that I need to pay for my health care. I would like to apply for a loan that may have a payment plan. The loan proximally could be $2500 that amount is going to include appointments at doctors and exams such as x-ray, blood test and treatments eider. My phone numbers is 8329657205. I would like to get an answer as soon as possible because I don’t feel very good.
John Ford Loan’s Department Bank of America Financial Center 2223 Gessner, Houston, Texas, 77080.
Attn: Bank Loan Request for $30.000.
Dear John Ford The objective of this letter is to request for a small business loan for $30.000. I am already have a daily pastry and I would like to add as part of my business, celliacs pastry. I need to invest in new kitchen utensils and kitchen appliance that only can be used for this special need. And prevent contamination with the rest of the kitchen staff. Please see the attached business plan. If you have any question, can contact me at 832 345 2132 or Manennasdailypastry@gmail.com. Sincerely,
Silvina Garcia. 800 Town and Country BLVD Houston, Texas, 77024.
Hi Lucia, I am reaching out to you to request a favor. I need aa loan for you to pay my student debt. It is about $ 10.000. Which I will be able to pay you back within the next twelve months. I would like to discuss with you in person the details but wanted to check first to see if this is actually an option. Let me know when we can meet. Best, Silvina.
Dear Jin Hi Jin. How is it going on your business? I am just wondering you can do me a favor. As you know that, I got big accident few days ago. Fortunately, I didn't get any dmage but my car has being junk. Houston, where I am living, is huge and very hot city which can not go anywhere without own car. So, I need to buy a used car as soon as possible, I need 5,000 dollors more to do it. I know it is hard to answer to me, and big money as a leader of your family. However, I promiss you I will pay back that after three month when I go back to Korea for visiting my parent.
God bless you my best friend.
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A letter to Chase bank
To whom may concern
Hi Mr. or Ma'am. My name is Keunwoo Park. I am contacting you due to circumstances beyond my control. Few days ago, I got a car acciden on I-10 highway. I should buy an used car as soon as possible, because my car has totally broken. My requirmen is I hope to loan for $10,000, if it is possible. I have used your bank for nine years, credit has no issue, and have not made any problem during deal with your bank.
Please reply email me as soon as possible.
Thank you.
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Hi Holly. I checked this web page H.W early this morning. It is my fault anyway. I have no Excuse. I just hope the due date is delaied on this morning before your class. Thank you
Dear, Pipe
ReplyDeleteI need some help from you. Now, I’m in serious financial payment. Next week, I have to pay the money for school but I don’t have enough money to do that. If I can’t pay the payment into Friday next week, the college will be dropped me off. So, I need to loan $3,000 from you.
I will return you the money within next two months, in two installments.
Please, help
Bow Woo
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August 25, 2016
Bank of Houston Community College
1010 West Sam Houston Pkwy N,
Houston, TX 77043
To whom it may concern,
My name is Bow Woo. I’m a student of HCC. I would like to obtain a personal loan in the amount of $3,000. This loan will be used to help me to enroll the classes. It’s important to me for study in this semester.
Please, contact me at your earliest convenience to discuss this matter further. I can be reached anytime at 832-345-6789. I would like to get this matter taken care of immediately.
Sincerely,
Bow Woo
Dear,kate
ReplyDeleteI got a trouble. I got a accident in last week. I need to pay for Service king's payment. If I don't pay it , I can't get my car ,and then I can't go to work and take class.so can you borrow 1000 dollars for me.
I will return for you after two weeks.
Please help
Yeming Zheng
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August 26,2016
Bank of chace 10850 Bellaire Blvd
Houston, TX 77072
United States
Dear, loan officers
My name is Yeming Zheng, i'm a student of Hcc I'm writing request for a personal loan of $1000 from your bank.the loan will pay for Service King . It is important to me for get my car.
I have a job , I am working in Cafe 101,I have been working for the past one and half year. Feel free contact the restaurant and verify that I work on there. The telephone numbers 713 272 8828.
I will be very grateful,if you can consider me for a loan of $1000 .you can contact me anytime on telephone 713 884 9994.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Yeming Zheng
08/27/2016
ReplyDeleteBank of America
1300 Mais street
Katy
To Whom It May Concern:
I would like to obtain a personal loan of 2000$. This among will be use for paid HCCollege semester that will begin the next school period. As you can see I was a Bank of America client since a long time, I have a very good record in my account since I opened 10 years ago. The reason that I am asking the loan is because I decided to improve my academic curriculum to improve my work skills.
I appreciate all you can do to help me to get the loan.
Thank you for your time
Sincerely
Fanny
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08/27/2016
Dear friend:
Hi, I hope you and all your family are fine. My husband and kids are doing well. As you know I want to improve my work skills, remember the last time you called me? I think I have to take these classes to reach the goal that we spoke of, but unfortunately I do not have the money. I am writing to you to ask if you could lend me money, 2000$ to be specific. We can arrange a way to pay you back, that is the most convenient for you. I will appreciate a lot this favor ...
Thank you so much
I love you
Fanny
Dear my cousin,
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing? I hope all is well with you. I'm starting new semester soon and I'm having some financial troubles. I earned enough money for tuition by working full time during summer at the tea house near my school. However, I still need more money to buy books. The tea house is under innovation now so I can't get back to work until next month. Would you be able to lend me $400 to buy books? I will pay you back as soon as I return to work. Please let me know.
Thank you,
Anh Hoang.
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Chase Bank
17225 Westheimer Rd, Houston, TX 77082
August 27th, 2016.
Dear loan officer,
My name is Anh Hoang. This is letter serves as my application for an auto loan in the amount of $5000. I'm buying a used 2013 Hyundai Sonata. Through researches and recommendations from family, I found that your bank offers the best interest rate and benefit to borrowers. I'm working part time at T&H Construction and making around $2700 monthly. Employment verification is attached. I believe my income is enough to pay back the loan soon. Please let me know if you can approve this application.
Regards,
Anh Hoang
Excellent letters, extremely well written.
DeleteUnder RENOVATION (not innovation)
1 : Ask money from friend.
ReplyDeleteHouston, August 27 - 2016
Dear Obama
It seems like we haven't met for a long time, i guess it's about almost 8 years from the day that you became a President. Oh... i should call you Mr. President. I have been watching you and I always agree what you are doing. By the time you almost complete your last term running America, I will be finishing my education. Since I don't have enough money to start my business, I really need an amount of $5000. I'm sure that I will give you back as soon as I can and during the time that i owe you, I will share to you my profit.
Thank you for your time.
Your friend,
Eric.
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2 : Ask money from bank
08-27-2016
Chase Bank
11111 New York RD
NYC
To whom it may concern :
I'm asking for a loan about $5000. I need this money to get married. I have been paying my loan in time and i have a good record. I'm sure i have enough money from my job that can pay this loan. My income is about $40000/year as a supervisor in my company.
I really appreciate for your time and please inform me with any notification.
Sincerely
Eric.
i just did the writing funnier ! Thanks for reading
DeleteDo you think the bank will loan you money to get married? I don't think that marriage is an investment--its more like a money drain!
DeleteBut you got the idea. Good work.
1.
ReplyDelete08-28-2016
WELLS FARGO
3981 Barker Cypress Rd 77084
To whom it may concern
I'm writing this letter to apply for a loan for my college.I'm going to attend the fall 2016 for full time and for 12 hours.I'm asking for a loan for $2000 to pay for my tuition books.I can send you a copy of my schedule and the invoice for my classes , if requested.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours
Mogheenee Murday
2.
08-28-2016
Dear Sabrina,
How are your doing? It's been almost a year with haven't talk to each other. I hope everything is going ok with your new job and you are enjoying living in California. It difficult for me to ask a favor from you. I started college and i'm struggling to cover the cost of my school . I'm asking if it possible to help me with a $2000 to cover the cost.I would pay you back within 1 year as am applying for a job.
Please let me know, if u can help within the next week because i have to pay the remaining balance within 10 days.
THANK You very much.
Your Friend ,
Mogheenee
EXCELLENT
DeleteDear, Alexa
ReplyDeleteHello how are you? I hope you are well. I write to ask for a loan of $ 1,000 to pay for college next semester. I'll return the money as soon as possible, I appreciate this favor.
Your friend
Erika
Chase Bank
ReplyDelete600 Travis St, Houston, TX 77002
August 28th, 2016
To whom It May Concern,
My name is Erika Ortega, I am a student of HCC. I am writing to ask you a personal loan of $ 1000 to pay next semester at school. Your loan would me much help.
I would be grateful if you would help me for the loan, you can contact me at 832 654 2548. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely:
Erika Ortega
Good work
DeleteDear Amy
ReplyDeleteff How are you? I hope everything going well. Now I have some problems for pay my school.And I need to borrow $1000 from you. I'm so thinkful if you can help me. I will return your money within one month.
please thanks
your friend lei
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Bank of America
Dear loan offer
My name is lei, I'm a student of HCC. I wold like to obtain a person loan for $1000. This will be halp me this semester. I have account in bank of america and I have good credit.The reason that I ask for bank of america because you have very good loan without interests. I hope you can help me to get this loan. I will pay the loan monthly from my account. Please let me know if my applition get approve.
Thank you for your time.
lei
August 28th 2016
Dear Luis
ReplyDeleteHello how are you? I write to see if I can help with a problem, if you can borrow the amount of $ 3000, I will need to pay the semester of college. I would appreciate your help.
Your friend
Hernan
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Chase Bank
600 Travis St, Houston, TX 77002
August 28th, 2016
To whom It May Concern
By this means, I extend an application to request an emergency loan to cover college expenses in the amount of $ 5,000
Waiting to have your help and understanding you can contact me at the number 832 999 0420.
Thanks for your attention.
Sincerely:
Hernan Ortega
okay
DeleteDear Dad and Mom,
ReplyDeleteAs you know, I'm going back to school now. And I already enrolled for the class and haven't paid for it yet! I need your help. I can afford for the books by working part time at the cashier in Ranch Market next to our house. However, I need to borrow $1200 to pay tuition for this semester. I promised I will work full time in summer to pay the money back to you.
Thank you Dad and Mom
Love you
Your lovely son Thoai Tran
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Bank of JPMorgan, Chase
132131 Fry Road
Katy, TX 77561
August, 28,2016
To whom it may concern
I'm Thoai Tran. I have been looking for a car with efficient fluid and affordable for me. Finally, I found the car I want to buy and I would like you to obtain for a auto loan about $15K. This will help me to buy a new car because it is dangerous when I drive a 1995's car on freeway .I'm currently working at the facial shop and my salary is about $22K to $28 per year. I have been working here for three years. I hope this information could get approve the auto loan from you. If you have any question, call me at 1233433577
Sincerely
Thoai Tran
Good work
DeleteDear Dad
ReplyDeleteHow are you? I want to tell you i'm finish my level and i'm go to next level so that mean you need to transfer money to my account. Atless before 5th of September.
Thank you dad for the support me.
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Chase Bank
1490 Eldridge Pkwy
Houston, TX 77077
Dear loan officer.
How are you? I hope every things it's ok. Generally as you now i'm student and i need a lot of money for school and apartment rent. It's important to pay after a few days. I wish to help me for loan.
Thank you
Muhannad Almutrafi
The letter to your father is okay but the letter to the loan officer is too informal and lacks detail. Try again please!
DeleteA Letter to the Loan Officer
ReplyDeleteDear Sir or Madam,
My name is Yongling Yang. I am writing to request for a $5,000 loan from your bank. I need the loan to complete two-year study of Logistic in HCC.
I have studied English for 2 months in HCC and will finish in this December. Then, I am going to study Logistic for 2 years in HCC. My GPA is above 3.5 until now. After I pass the English course, I will get a two-year contract of a part-time job in a Chinese and English institute, and it will also provide accommodation. The salary is estimated $1000 at the least. Therefore, I will be able to pay off the loan in 2 years.
I will appreciate if you could consider me for a loan of $5,000 over a period of two years. You can contact me on cellphone 000-0000-0000 to arrange an interview if required.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Yongling Yang
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A Letter to My Best Friend
Hi, Yoyo
I have only $20 this month to live on. The next half month, I just can drink water to survive. Can you borrow me $200 to pass the difficult? I can return it on 1st next month. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Yongling
EXCELLENT. Just water to survive hahahahaha
DeleteCan you LOAN me some money? I need to borrow from you.
(LOAN=give the money; BORROW=take the money)
August 29, 2016
ReplyDeleteUncle Jose
1548 Rich Ave
houston, Tx 77045
Dear Uncle Jose
I hope You are well with all my cousins, Peter, Frank and July, and I like to let You know that my wedding anniversary is coming in December and I promise my wife to go to Can Cun to our anniversary, but the problem is, I do not have enough money, and I like to ask you for a 3.000 dollars loan and I will pay you $ 1000 per month.
when We came back from Can Cun , We are going to make a party and you will be the first guess of the party
I love Uncle Jose
sincerely Luis Alcayaga
Is your uncle going to loan you money to take a vacation? If so, that's a very nice uncle.
Delete(I see that he lives on RICH AVENUE!)
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ReplyDeleteDear John,
How are you doing, how is your work and your family, hope everything is going on well with you? john i will like to express to you my present situation on need,i need some money to balance my tuition fee before the due date, you are my only friend i can express this to and hopefully i receive a good response from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Adetoye.
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2. A later to a bank for loan
Adetoye
1450 Empanada dr
Houston Tx 77083
08/28/2016
Chase Bank
14502 Highway 6 s
Houston TX 77083.
APPLICATION FOR LOAN
Dear Sir/Ma
Good day, i Adetoye Ajomole with the above address here by apply for a loan from you bank,i need this money to balance up my tuition fee and get my test books.
i will like to be considered for this loan and i promise to pay back at when due. hope to hear back from you soon.
Thanks in Anticipation.
Yours Faithfully
Adetoye Ajomole
EXCELLENT
DeleteAugust 29. 2016
ReplyDeleteBank of America
2424 Gessner Rd
Houston, Tx 77080
Attn: Loan Officer John Peterson
I would like to obtain a personal loan in the amount of $ 3.000.00. This loan will be used to celebrate our wedding anniversary, and We are planing to go to Cancun.
I have been a longtime banking with you and I have four open accounts with you. I had a loan with your bank , which I paid off. I currently self employed with my Income tax business and I just celebrated our 26th year anniversary.
I have an excellent credit history and I hope you approve my loan
Sincerely
luis Alcayaga
I don't think the bank will loan you money to go to Cancun and I don't think they care about your wedding anniversary! But the rest of the letter is good :)
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ReplyDeleteHello, im writing this letter regardless a favor i need from you. As you know, we been best friends for 6 years so long, and well, i need to borrow money from you. My parents dont want to help me move out, but i need my independence from them. I promise i will pay you back as soon i get a job. You know well that between us never been any issues with anything. Let me know if i can count on you.
Love, Rosaida.
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Dear Chase bank,
Im writing this letter in favor of a loan I desperately need. Recently my parents called me, telling me that they will need to move in with me fast as possible. I recently live in a one bed room apartment, but this wont be enough for all of us. I need to buy furnitures and appliance for the house as well. Ive been responsible with all my payments in the bank and my credit score is very good. If i receive that loan, it will help me and my family greatly. Hope I get a respond back from you guys. Thank you
Rosaida
Hello my friends, how are you? I know, we have a lot of time that didn’t have talked. I’m writing this letter to ask if you remember when 3 years ago I borrowed $ 1000. Well, can you give it back? I see that you in this days have a great position in the company that you are working, so I need some more money, in totally I need $2500. May you borrow me that amount? I promise that I will pay you as soon as possible. Before I didn’t need the money but right now I have a real health problem so, I can’t afford the bills. My back each day is worse, I’m going to take an appointment with a few doctors and take a lot of exams, such as blood test and x-rays. I hope that you answer soon.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much my Costi.
Your friends Mena.
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Bank of the Health Care.
2743 Jeanette rd.
Houston, Texas. 77067.
To whom it may concern.
My name is Ximena Mora, I am 26 years old and I have back problems. I’m from Venezuela and my current status is F1 for that I can’t afford all of the bills that I need to pay for my health care. I would like to apply for a loan that may have a payment plan. The loan proximally could be $2500 that amount is going to include appointments at doctors and exams such as x-ray, blood test and treatments eider.
My phone numbers is 8329657205. I would like to get an answer as soon as possible because I don’t feel very good.
Thanks so much.
Regards.
Ximena Mora.
I'm unclear whether you're asking your friend for a loan or to repay a debt that she owes you.
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ReplyDeleteAugust 29th, 2016.
John Ford
Loan’s Department
Bank of America Financial Center
2223 Gessner, Houston, Texas, 77080.
Attn: Bank Loan Request for $30.000.
Dear John Ford
The objective of this letter is to request for a small business loan for $30.000.
I am already have a daily pastry and I would like to add as part of my business, celliacs pastry.
I need to invest in new kitchen utensils and kitchen appliance that only can be used for this special need. And prevent contamination with the rest of the kitchen staff.
Please see the attached business plan.
If you have any question, can contact me at 832 345 2132 or Manennasdailypastry@gmail.com.
Sincerely,
Silvina Garcia.
800 Town and Country BLVD
Houston, Texas, 77024.
Excellent
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ReplyDeleteHi Lucia, I am reaching out to you to request a favor. I need aa loan for you to pay my student debt. It is about $ 10.000. Which I will be able to pay you back within the next twelve months. I would like to discuss with you in person the details but wanted to check first to see if this is actually an option. Let me know when we can meet. Best, Silvina.
Dear Jin
ReplyDeleteHi Jin. How is it going on your business? I am just wondering you can do me a favor. As you know that, I got big accident few days ago. Fortunately, I didn't get any dmage but my car has being junk. Houston, where I am living, is huge and very hot city which can not go anywhere without own car. So, I need to buy a used car as soon as possible, I need 5,000 dollors more to do it. I know it is hard to answer to me, and big money as a leader of your family. However, I promiss you I will pay back that after three month when I go back to Korea for visiting my parent.
God bless you my best friend.
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A letter to Chase bank
To whom may concern
Hi Mr. or Ma'am. My name is Keunwoo Park. I am contacting you due to circumstances beyond my control. Few days ago, I got a car acciden on I-10 highway. I should buy an used car as soon as possible, because my car has totally broken. My requirmen is I hope to loan for $10,000, if it is possible. I have used your bank for nine years, credit has no issue, and have not made any problem during deal with your bank.
Please reply email me as soon as possible.
Thank you.
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Hi Holly.
I checked this web page H.W early this morning. It is my fault anyway. I have no Excuse. I just hope the due date is delaied on this morning before your class.
Thank you
The letters are good and you're not too late :)
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